DacVanHomind's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[MotionGuides4Beginners 2]

disapointing...

i can't say why this motion guide is "advanced", it is barely a simple explanation for beginners.
Also, the menu was poorly animated. The effect would look much nicer if you'd work with a mask layer, that should make you able to close the page completely before changing the content...

CollectorofExp responds:

This tutorial was made with someone who has no knowledge of what a motion guide is, other than from my first tutorial. Compared to the stuff in there, this is advanced. Oh and thanks for the tip on the menu, it's a slight error I think I made and I'll fix it as soon as possible.

[Flash Piano]

Good Game!

I had tons of fun tring to recreate some old tunes i memorized :).
Found a bug though. Holding one button wil couse the Game to play the tune repetatly. Don't know if thats a feature, but a real piano would simply fadeout.

chugger1992 responds:

it does that because I had to use a WAV sound for the notes, AFAIK Flash can't produce it's own tones.

[Blobness Scene Creator]

What's the point?^

This is barely a dressup game, the art ist medicore, the music annoying.
Did I miss something (serious question). I thought this was a "game".

Ash4792 responds:

i never said it was a dressup game, i said it was a scene creator (big difference). And yes, you missed something, it's based on my up and coming series so it was just a publicity thing to get people more aware of the series for when it comes out.

[Something in my Toes]

Buggy

Graphics are medicore, the sound annoying and the gameplay way to simple (but still very buggy)...

needs a lot of work

KyleDaFox responds:

Sound? You mean the soothing music. I don't understand how the gameplay is buggy, everything played fine. PM how it was buggy, I don't understand.

[Dancin' Pankratz]

Solid

Maybe fun if ya know him, nobody here does, so its not fun...
The Animation is cool anyway :).

ChilliDog responds:

Yea, that's why I wasn't going to submit it. I thought maybe it could be enjoyed anyway? Thanks for the review!

[Globe Crusher]

needs a lot of tweeking

pretty decent game for the first submission. you need to add more graphics, effects to it. i wasn't really aware that the ship in the upper right corner becoming white means that i lost a life, a simple fadeout would have done better.
the collision detection adds up the problem.
the "new life" symbol is simply the smaller scaled (rotating) ship, looks like another ship in problems^^, what about taking the white ship as "new life" symbol?

EkenAstrom responds:

Okey =) i will try to make the graphics better. Thanks for the idé to make the white ship new life symbol, will try to see how it would look. And im also gonna try anathor graphic when you loose a life =) thx..